Monday, April 7, 2014

Dealing with exposition. Death to the red-shirts!




One of the challenges with creating an audio play is that I need to be able create a picture of the scene in the listeners head without resorting to a tonne of clunky sounding exposition.

As an example. Let's say you have two characters - John and Nick - and Nick is wearing a red shirt. How do I communicate this to the reader?

Do I have one character say, "Hello John, I see you are wearing a red shirt"?

Sounds a bit odd doesn't it? It seems odd because it's not the way people talk naturally. We don't walk around loudly declaring each and everything that we see for the benefit of an invisible listener.

So the question is: how do I communicate that Nick is wearing a red shirt to the reader in a way that doesn't sound awkward.

Perhaps a few lines of dialogue.
"Hello John"
"Hi Nick"
"What happened to your shirt?"
"I made the mistake of washing it with lighter colors. Now it's faded and everything else is red."

This is a bit more interesting. The dialogue is more believable and in addition to learning that he is wearing a faded red shirt, we have also learned that Nick is not very good at washing his clothes.

Another option is to share the characters inner monologue.
"Hello John", I said.
"Hi Nick", he replied.
That red shirt again, I thought to myself, does he own nothing else?

The third option is to ask if the information needs to be included at all. Is the fact that John is wearing a red shirt necessary to the rest of the story?

Tuesday, March 18, 2014

Project Update: Creating a sound environment.


One of the main challenges with this project is determining which parts of the story can be told through dialogue and descriptions, and which parts can be told through sound effects.

I thought it would be fun to try and put together a short audio piece that tells the story of the main character walking down a city street on a planet in EVE.

The main things that I would need to convey are.

- The character is travelling from one location to another.
- He is in a city in the future.
- The part of the city his passing through is impoverished.

And I cannot use any dialogue. Just sound effects.

This should be fun! I hope to have something to share by the end of the week.

Wednesday, March 5, 2014

The drone hive

Whilst exploring a vast derelict I discovered a drone hive. I've probably been detected already. If you're reading this message I'm already dead.

Sunday, March 2, 2014

Fiction: A day in the life


After dropping out of warp, I carefully steered my 'Primae' class explorer ship into a stationary orbit around a barren desert planet, in the 'Dour' solar system.

Dour is a solar system that is notorious for pirate activity, and for the mineral wealth of its planets and asteroid fields. There was money to be made. And I liked that.

Nestled in my ship’s hanger was an automated command centre. Once safely installed on a planet’s surface, it would unleash thousands of drones, which would immediately construct drilling platforms for the extraction of the planets wealth. Best of all they could be operated remotely. “Set and forget”, was the manufacturers motto.

Love it.

I knew that my entry into the solar system would almost certainly have been detected. I also knew that even with the most sophisticated equipment, it would take the average pirate at least five minutes to track me down. I had to be quick.

I tuned my radio receivers to monitor the local area broadcasts for any sign of pirate activity. This would hopefully give me advance warning of any unwanted intruders. This done, I trained my ships sensor array at the planet’s surface.

4 minutes left.

Interference from the planet’s atmosphere generated a steady static on my monitor. Patiently, with my hands showing the first pin-pricks of sweat, I manipulated my ship’s sensor frequencies to cancel out the static. Having spent days practicing on planets in high security space I was quickly able to find the correct frequencies, and was rewarded with a view of the planets subsurface.

3 minutes left.

I fed the data through to the ships navigation computer and instructed it to search for any significant deposits of minerals. Even my ships supercomputers would take a few moments to scan the thousands of square kilometres of the planet’s surface for any juicy deposits. Time I didn’t have.

2 minutes left.

Suddenly, my attention was drawn by a loud beeping to the local broadcasts monitor. Amongst the unrecognisable coded messages of normal pirate chatter, I saw a familiar numerical code. It was my ships unique identifier. They had found me.

1 minute left.

The ships navigational computer flashed. It had found a deposit. I swiftly transferred the co-ordinates to the ships launcher bay controls and began the automated launch sequence. The command deck reverberated as the hanger’s massive machinery heaved into action.

30 seconds left.

Screeches from the broadcast monitor alerted me to the impending arrival of warp capable ships. They were almost here. I had moments left.

A loud clunk followed by an eerie silence signalled that the ship was ready to release its payload. I pressed launch.

The entire ship shook as it launched the payload at the planet. Almost simultaneously, parts of space seemed to bubble and bend as the pirate’s ships coalesced out of warp. They were here.

I was fucked.

Things seemed to move in slow motion. I heard the shrill beeping of my ships targeting computer signalling multiple hostiles locking their weapons on my ship. Through the window I saw the reddish glow of the command centre as it entered the planet’s atmosphere, I heard the computer’s confirmation that the landing jets had activated and that its parachute had safely deployed. It at least would survive.

I yelled for the computer to activate the warp computers.

It calmly asked for coordinates.

I saw streaks of smoke detach from the pirate ships and begin hurtling towards me. The blackness of space was filled the pretty red flames of their engines.

Panicked I reached for the navigation console and hammered in a random set of coordinates. Slowly, painfully, the ship began to turn to align itself for warp.

I stood frozen as I watched the missiles speed closer and closer.

I could feel my heartbeat. I could feel the calmness that accompanies the certainty of death. I felt hungry.

Reality began to bend as the ship began to enter warp drive.

Idly, I wondered what the chances where of warping into the sun.

Then, nothing.

Not even darkness.

Was this death?